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Waiting For You

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My very first Painting ilustration :)
I need a critique and some improvement motivation from you guys :iconasunadownplz:
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First of all, it is very well put together. The background makes you focus on her, isn't too strong, but still there, creating an atmosphere. The hair is well done and looks nice and lively. The skin is well blended, the shoulder loooks a tad bit angular, but overall not bothering. The cloths, I think it's a good choice to have them like this, not too detailed, it makes one focus on the face.
for the face, the lips are very well done, as well as the nose. The only thing about the eyes I might have to say is that you imitated the reflexions in the eyes from like I've seen when people directly look into a camera with a professionally set up lightsource, like in music videos, and if that was intent... I usually think eyes seem more realistic when the reflexions are different and accent the 3D effect of eyes. if that is understandable at all:/
over all, very nice work in semi-realism!